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Critique 10/10


Tomorrow it will be my second critique, and my focus will be mainly on the manuscript that I’ve sent through email. This story is very important to me, now more than ever for everything that is happening in Brazil.

Here are some questions that I would love if you guys could answer:

  • Do you like the story? Do you empathize with the characters?
  • what do you think about the dialogues? In your opinion they are compatible with the age of the characters?
  • How do you feel about the ending?

These are the basic questions, and I look forward to hear what you all have to say, even if it is not related to the questions above.

Ah, bonus question: What do you think about the narrator?

See you tomorrow!